Monday, 11 November 2013

Chapter 4: Part 2!



Hey everyone! Im sorry adre this post is late but i was so sick because of the change in weather, ma3alyh sam7oune. + kent bagoul, i have a good amount of page views (THANKYOUU💗💗💗💗💗) ou when i started kelsh ma tewa8a3t ina ykoun chethe but i barely get any feedback. Dont be shy, if you like the story, pls send feedback even if you're a silent reader (ask.fm: www.ask.fm/wronngg ) 

Another thing, i didnt mention before that noor is a spoiled girl.. Alot of people think of her as a brat&self- centred, but they dont know her really well, cause noor is kind&light- hearted..
noor is the kind of person with a weak and sensitive personality but hides it with a strong emotion...
 
Enjoyy💗💗

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remember from the last post, it is still ahmed's point of view: 



I didn't expect those words from noor at all, it was a big shocker to me. 

What she did was wrong, it was so dangerous, witha 9ar feehum shay?

At that moment, i received a call from yasmeen; my sister,  

Me: halla yasmeen
Yasmeen: wainik? 
Me: Mazra3a, laish?
Yasmeen: sayarte bl garage ou il sayeg lyoum ejaza, kent abeek tawadene avenues ayeeb nafnoof sharayta! 
Me: lyoum? La matwa8a3 lyoum agdar
Yasmeen: mategdar?
Me: la wallahh, ana bl mazra3a 
Yasmeen: please ahmed please, i need it!
Me: yasmeen 5alas 3ad, getlich magdar
Yasmeen: zain shfeeck m3a9ib?
Me: mu m3a9b, bs tawne tahawsht ma3a bent 3amy
Yasmeen: noor?
Me: ee, 5alas yalla bye
Yasmeen: bye:( 


•i am going to skip what happened next in ahmed's point of view...• 

Noor's point of view: 

Lama radayt il cabin, i thought about ahmed's words lama gal "bs?" i think he expected me to tell him something more than "shnu tabe '3ada mn wolk&roll". Was ahmed being dramatic or i was exaggerating? 


Ga3adt shway ma3a rayan chan agum abadel mn my riding clothes, lama 5alast ou nezalt, the food was already here! 


I sat on the dinning table chan ahmed ydesh mnafis! He was heading to the main door...

Rayan: Ahmed 6elabt extra tabe?
Ahmed: la
Rayan: zain metta btred il deera? 
Ahmed: around 6 
Rayan: Ana ou noor bnred awal ma n5alis akel 

Ahmed opened the door, went outside and slammed it!

Shda3wa Shda3wa! I knew the answer to my question, he was being dramatic. 

Rayan&Me finished our lunch in peace then each of us headed to her room to pack up her things...



I finished quickly and i wore this:






and then went downstairs to wait for rayan! Always late as usual 

When she finally came, rekabna il sayara, blasted abdulmajeed ou radayna il deera!

Wa9alt rayan bait'hum ou radayt baity...



We9alt il bait, wela ashuf umy ou uby ga3deen bl 9ala! 

Baba: ya halla, halla ib noor 3ayne! 
(my dad always called me 'noor 3ayne' which means 'the brightness to his eyes') 

me: halla baba..shlounik? shlounich mama? i said as i headed to kiss both my parents foreheads.

mama: ana tamam! Stanastay bl mazra3a?

me: ehh wallah wanasa! ou il jaw eyanin mashalla! 3ad inshallah ytem chethe!

baba: sheftay noomie?
me: baba esemha naomie
baba: ily uho...
me: eeh sheft'ha tyanin! 3an ethenkum bagum abadel
baba: ethnich ma3ach 7abebtee


i entered the elevator and went up to my room, changed into something comfortable and started studying for the quiz i have tomorrow! 


@ around 11:30, i went to bed exhausted. 
The next morning, i woke up @ 9:30 cause i had a quiz at 10:15 ou i didnt want to miss it...

I decided what to wear for college which was this: 










on my way to college i got a call from noora:
noora: ga3da mbacher lyoum, ma3ena nayma late ams, sh9ayer bldenyaaa?
me: hahaa, quiz first period 
noora: 6oul 3umrich tet2a5erain 3an quizzes! Shelfarg?
me: laa, lazim arafi3 my grades ib this class
noora: ma9adeg!
me: hahahaaa, wallah, yallah ga3id asoug ashufich bl class
noora: byeee

We9alt gust & i went directly to class, ashwa yat gabel il doctor ou sheft noora sitting at the back, i went and took a seat next to her,
Noora: itha 5alastay ne6renee ib starbucks
Me: Ok!
chan il doctor ydesh: 

He handed the quizzes ou bedayt a7el...

When i finished i handed him the paper ou 6ela3t, ashwa il 7emdellah sahel!

I went to starbucks & i ordered plain black coffee... 

But something there caught my eye...i saw the guy from entrocontè (that was staring, i never saw him, mn metta ydawim ib gust??) bs luckily he still didnt see me & i didnt want him to. I texted noora saying "meet me ib red mango, lama tyeen agulich laish mu starbucks!"


 


 


 










Tuesday, 5 November 2013

Chapter 4: Part 1

you guessed it! 

AHMED.

ahmed was waiting for us at the stables leaning to one side of the gates. 

as we were approaching the gates ahmed asked "ha stanastaw?" 

"9ara7atan eeh 7ada wanasa! Noor fazat 3alay bl race!" Rayan said as if we did nothing wrong

Ahmed: Rayan deshay da5il..
Rayan: ou noor? 
Ahmed: ba7acheeha shway

"bsmllah bsmllah" i thought 

Rayan: many dasha bedoun noor! 
Ahmed: Rayan getlich deshay da5il noor ba7acheha shway ou tridlich.

*Rayan got down her horse and started walking back to the farm.*

* i got down from naomie and headed towards ahmed!*

Ahmed: "ma thaya3taw?" he was calm but there was a strictness to his voice.

Me: "imbala" i answered.
Ahmed: "ou shloun dalaitaw?" 
Me: "shefna sign il mazra3a" 
Ahmed: "ahaa."
Me: "Ahmed tara ma9ar shay, please la tnafs!"
Ahmed: "LA WALLAH?? MA 9AR SHAY? FACHEEN GATES IL FIELD OU 6AL3EEN BARA OU A5ER SHAY TGOULEEN MA9AR SHAY? MAT3ARFEEN INA ITS DANGEROUS? TARA ITHA ENTAY MU 5AYFA 3ALA NAFSICH ANA 5AYIF 3ALA RAYAN!" 

men9eja hatha? At that moment, i was so pissed! Jad mnu uhwa eyee ou egoul ana mu 5ayfa 3ala my best cousin ou 3ala nafse?



Me: "TARA YOU ARE EXAGGERATING, ITS A PRIVATE ROAD SHDA3WA! OU BA3DAYN MNU GALIK ANA MU 5AYFA 3ALA RAYAN! A3ARFIK 7AG YOMAIN OU TYEE TGOULE MA A5AF 3ALA NAFSE?? A9LAN MNU ENTA? UMY? UBY? MU SHE'3LIK ITHA FACHAINA IL GATES OU 6ELA3NA!" 

"umbay umbay umbay ana shsawait? shgeleet? now i was exaggerating" i thought as i walked away from him and headed to the farm. 

As i entered the farm, latifa approached me
Rayan: ha sh9ar?

i told Rayan everything that happened, when i finished she was on the ground laughing hysterically! 

Me: chub, i made a total fool of my self!

Rayan: 7adda! Uhwa wayna? 
Me: madre 3ana! 
Me: Enzain, ana 7ade you3ana!
Rayan: 5an6alb wolk&roll, meshteheeta! 
Me: umm ok!
Rayan: Ru7ay se2lay ahmed itha yabe
Me: Laaa! 
Rayan: imbala yalaa
Me: no
Rayan: ana mu ba6lb? 3ayl lazim entay trou7een tes2elena
Me: ukh fine..

I opened the glass door and started walking towards the field, when i was almost there, i heard ahmed talking on the phone and it seemed like a girl.

Ahmed: lyoum? la matwa8a3 lyoum agdar...
Ahmed: laa wallah, ana bl mazra3a ma3a il 3ayla
Ahmed: yasmeen 5alas 3ad, getlich magdar
Ahmed: mu m3a9ib, bs tawne t'hawasht ma3a bent 3amy.
Ahmed: eeh, 5alas yalla bye

i started walking towards him,
Ahmed: ya ya te3tathrain 9a7?

when he said those words i turned my back to him and started walking back to the farm

he started walking/running to catch up on me..he held my arm and turned me around...

Ahmed: shfeech m3a9ba lyoum? 
Me: Mu m3a9ba, you're just being annoying!!
Ahmed: ouch. l7een ily y5af 3alich is being annoying! 

i pulled his hand away from my arm and started walking 

again, he started walking and held my arm again..

me: ahmed hed edde tara y3awer
ahmed: mageltle..shnu kentai betgolelee? 
me: hed edy, y3awr

*he was holding it so tightly* 

ahmed: golay ou ahedich
me: rayan kant bet3aref shnu tabe '3ada mn wolk&roll
ahmed: bs? 
me: ee bs! L7een 3ade t'heed edee? 

*ahmed let go of my hand and then i made my way to the cabin*

Ahmed's point of view:

That day, after noor and rayan left the farm to go horseback riding, i sat on the couch and started watching television until i heard *beep**beep**beep* it was coming from a macbook that was on the table. I decided to open it out of curiosity, the screensaver was a picture of noor, she looked really beautiful. 

"ahmed what are you saying? shes your cousin" i thought to myself. 

Luckily, there was no password, iPhoto was open, i started scrolling vertically to see all the pictures, she looked prettier in each one.

I realised  what i was doing was wrong so i closed the laptop, then headed upstairs to take a shower, when i was done, i had nothing to do so the best thing was to go outside and check on Rayan and Noor! 

When i reached the field, the gates were open. I automatically knew it was noor's idea, rayan 5awafa. I decided to wait for them...

When they came i asked rayan to go inside and and i had an argument with noor...

"U9LAN MNU ENTA? UMY? UBY? MU SHE'3LICK ITHA FACHAINA IL GATES OU 6ELA3NA!"












Q

chapter 3

when i went back to my room, i automatically drifted to sleep...

until... 

Rayan:noor 
          noor
          nwayrr!
          NOROO 
          NOOR GUMAYY!!

me: gemt gemt 
Rayan: a5eeran! 
me: shda3wa lahadarja numy thegeel! 
Rayan: uff 7ada!
me: sa3a cham? 
Rayan: 10, gumay 5al nrou7 stables nshuf naomie and zac! 
me: yalla, a'3asel ou abadel 
Rayan: zain ana na6ritich ta7at, mu tredeen tnameen! 

i got up from my bed, dashait il7amam, i did my buisness then i wore my riding clothes.... 



when i went downstairs i saw Rayan sitting on the couch watching television and mohammed (one of my boy cousins, hes 20 ou hes kind of a foodie!) sitting at the dinning table eating pancakes: 

me: 9aba7 il 5ayr! 
mohammed: hallah hallah ib bent 3amy, you3na? 
me: la thankyou!
mohammed: may9eer may9eer, lazim takleen! 
me: bs ana mu yo3ana, mu meshtahya akel
Rayan: mohammed mu lazim takel, lbnaya mu meshtahya..
mohammed: la la meshtahya bs teste7ee!  *he got up from his seat, took my hand and then he lead me to the table* ge3day mene ou wait!

after 2 minutes he came with a plate of pancakes with strawberries and blueberries on the side: 
*placed the plate infront of me*
mohammed: dig in! 
noor: thanks...bs wallah mu meshtahya! 

at that moment, ahmed entered the room. He was wearing navy free- citys, white shirt and slippers. Did i mention he looked so damn hot? 

ahmed: salam
*mohammed's phone rang and he headed outside to talk* 

all: wa3alykum il salam 

*he headed to the seat on the dinning table directly infront of me* 

ahmed: mashuf a7ad, wain il ahal ou il khadam? 

Rayan: 3amaty ou 3yalhum radaw 3endehum melcha ou 3amamy ra7aw il 7adag, il khadam radaw il deera.

ahmed: ahaa, noor?
me: halla
ahmed: cham 3umrech? 
me: 19
ahmed: tdawmen ib ay jam3a?
Me: gust 
*Rayan came and she had that annoying smirk..*
shes up to something.. 

Rayan: ahmed 3endk more questions?
ahmed: la *his face became shwaya red* 
7ARRAAMM!
Rayan: noor ready?
me: eeh yallah. 
ahmed: 3ala wayn?
me: stables, menzeman ma sheft naomie
ahmed said as we headed to the door: ok take care noor
ahmed: um...and Rayan
Rayan: i will, thanks!


While we were walking to stables
me: Rayan cham 3umer ahmed?
Rayan: 3umra 21, yrou7 KU ou he studies engineering, 3enda 2 sisters: nada, 3umerha 16 ou yasmeen, 19 kubrech. He fell in love mara wa7da ib 7ayata lama kan senior bs il bnaya 6la3at player, at'thakar tam 2 monthes depressed, 7aram 9a7?...
Me: bs bs, sa2altich cham 3umra mu gulay 8e9at 7ayata!
Latifa: eh ya3ne agoulich 3ashan t3arfeen 3ana!




we reached the stables and then i finally saw my babe naomiee!!  

me: ma9adeg its been a year since i last saw youu, i missed you so so much.. 

i took her out of her cabin and started riding her around the field..

latifa: tsabgeen? 
me: yallah, lets open the gates!
latifa: are you serious? Its dangerous! 
me: shda3wa, its a private road, maku sayarat
latifa: umm okay bs ana maly she'3el...i got down opened the gates & off we went...

halfway through our race, we stopped for a break

latifa: tdeleen wayna? 
me: um..eh shloun madil!
latifa: akeed? 
me: eeh akeed
latifa: 3ayal 5anred!
me: lets go! 

latifa: noor 9arlena sa3a n7oos, tdelen wela la?
me: la madel
latifa: SHNUU? SHLUN YA3NE?
me: latifa dont freak out, 3ade we will retrace our steps
latifa: badig 3ala ahmed.
me: la pls ila ahmed, mabe ya5ith fikra '3ala6 3ane! We will retrace our steps ou itha malegaina ndeg 3alai

we tried our best to remember what road we came from until finally we saw a sign that said "....مزرعة ال" 

latifa: uff ashwa! 
as we entered the gates we saw...

latifa: shoufay mnu ga3id yan6erna

"SHIT!" was the only thing that came to my mind at the moment. 




 







chapter 2

the next morning i woke up with a huge headache! Staying in bed all day and watching the vampire diaries seemed totally fine in my head until Rayan barged into my room! At that moment, i knew it was never gonna happen!


Here's the thing about Rayan: She ALWAYS has plans; Rayan knows what shes gonna be doing everyday for the next week! 
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Rayan is my cousin mn 9ub ubuy, i lost contact with my cousins mn 9ub ubuy menzeman ila rayan! She is my favorite cousin!
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Me: Fe shay esma egegon il bab? 
Rayan: Laish a6ig il bab entay mu '3areeba ou ba3dayn shbashuf? shnu your plans 7ag ilyoum?

Me: Staying in bed all day and watching the vampire diaries?

Rayan: No that is not plans, that is laziness; il jaw eyanin ou il cousins kelehum bl mazra3a, shrayich nru7?

Me: mazra3a? sha5baree! 9arle foug il sena mu ray7a hnak!

Rayan: ehh nafsee! i miss naomie and zac soo much! (naomie is my horse and zac is rayan's horse (overly obsessed zac efron fan!!) 


-im not so close with the family on my fathers side, 9arle foug il 4 years mu shayfat'hum, ya3ne i dont really remember them- 

Rayan: Yallah gumay '3aslay ou ana i choose your outfit


i got up from my comfortable bed and headed towards the bathroom..i did my business...then i wore what rayan chose for me: 











Rayan: ready? 
Me: ehh yallah 
Rayan: 5anru7 ib sayartich! 
Me: laa, kelesh mali khilg asoug
Rayan: ehh 3ade ana asug! Mnu mayabe yarkeb Mercedes sls ib hal jaw?😍

We rode my car and off to abdaly we went! Halfway through, we stopped at starbucks for breakfast...

Rayan: Yallah 5ananzil!
Me:entay nezlay ana bag3ad hnee!
Rayan: okk, shtabeen?
Me: tall black coffee 
Rayan: yallah ok


while waiting, two kuwaiti dudes came and they were knocking on the window of the car! 

"noor just ignore them, mara7 ysawon lich shay" i thought to myself. 

but they kept knocking i started to get pissed.

"yallah laish rayan t2a5erat, those guys wont leave!!" 

Then, another guy came and he was talking to them...i heard some of their of their conversation...

guy#3: entaw ma teste7oon? ga3deen tet7areshoon ib bnaya?....

omgg! He was shooting them off..yes finnallyyyy!
 
When the 2 dudes left, i got down from my car and thanked the 3rd dude: 

Me: Mashkoor maga9art! Matadre law mu enta chan ana l7een 7ady metwahga!

Dude: 3ade masawaina shay! Deree balich! 

I got back to the car and FINALLY rayan came & we started heading back to abdaly.

When we reached our destination, i was kind of nervous: 

Me: Rayan 3amaty ou 3amamy wela bs cousins? 

Rayan: madre 5andish wenshuf! 

As soon as i entered, everyone in the living room turned around and faced me. 

I headed towards my grandma&grandpa ou salamt 3alyhum 

then i made my way to the rest of the aunts&uncles

ofcourse, i heard alot of "menzeman 3anich" "yal ga63aa"....

Then i took a seat on the couch next to rayan..

Rayan: tabeen we ne6la3 ou netmasha?
Me: ehh plsss!
Rayan: Yallah 

Jad no one understands me more than rayan❤️

We headed out and started walking
Noor: makent adre 3ende hot cousins! 
Rayan: wayyy333! Men9ijich?
Noor: eh wallah 
Rayan: il cousin il wa7eed ily hot uhwa ahmed
Noor: mnu ahmed?
Rayan: weld 3ame fuad, yemken mara7 eyee!

We sat on a bench

Me: so thirsty! Baru7 ayeeb may! 
Rayan: la 5alich, ana baru7 ayeeb may ou bagul 7ag umy e7na bara
Me: ok bser3a!

As i was clicking on my phone waiting for noor to come back

Then, i saw a guy was walking naomie, the guy looked kuwaiti. Its not like he worked at the farm and was walking her, he was kuwaiti. I would know naomie any where. 
  
I decided to get up and ask him

Me: Exuse Mee! 
...: Yea? *he turned his face towards me and guess what? he was the life saver that helped me get rid of the two dudes @ starbucks, shal 9edfaa?? so creepy!*
Me: i think youre walking my horse
...: ohh hatha malich?
Me: eh? 
...: im so sorry! Ana kela aye mene ou la7atht ina il horse kela trapped bl stables so bedayt kel weekend i walk him, again, im so sorry!
Me: So you are a random guy yait il stables malatna ou bedayt tmashe my horse??
...: Laa, esmee ahmed, ou your horse kan ib our barn, i think youre my long lost 
cousin

"ahmed? ahmed? ahmed! Ahmed is the totally hot guy Rayan told me about! I admit he was kind of hot!" I thought

me: ohh okk, anyways, so sorry fahamt il salfa '3ala6 
Ahmed: La 3ade, im the one who should be apoligizing, i walked your horse without asking 

*At that moment i saw Rayan coming towards us holding two cold water bottles with a smirk on her face* 

Rayan: I see you have already met!
Ahmed: Ehh, we just met... Yallah im going back to the stables, take care rayan and....
me: noor 

*He started walking back and rayan handed me the water bottle and she still had that smirk on her face*

me: what?
Rayan: hottie right? 
me: uff 7ada
Rayan: someone has a new crushh! 
me: chub, i just met him! Lets head back beda y9eer bard
Rayan: Yallah! 
 


























 

 

Sunday, 3 November 2013

chapter 1

i rushed past the grand living room with its sumptuous Moroccan carpets and its green silk couches and armchairs and, hanging above it all, a great chandelier with a hundred crystal teardrops, which always threatened to click against each other but never actually did. As i walked out the front door, i felt a heat wave blowing my hair all to my face. I got into my car as i made my way to college...


When i reached gust, i practically ran through the empty halls (wearing heels that day didnt help and the fact that i was already 5 minutes late) 

i FINALLY reached Dr. Naders room, i entered the classroom through the huge wooden doors to realize the whole classroom was staring at me! Ukh typical!

Dr. Nader: Noor why are you always late to my morning classes?

Me: I guess im not a morning person nor i like waking up in mornings...

Dr. Nader: Well Noor, you have to learn how to wake up early or we will have a problem since all of my classes are in the morning. This is college not high school...he continued lecturing me about the importance of being early to class..(he was being so harsh, shda3wa i was just late). 

He totally hates me!

I took a seat next to Farah, 

Farah whispered: maku fayda feech, kela met2a5ra!

i whispered back: shasawe, ush 5anisma3 mali khilg zafa thanya!

i sat for the next 40 minutes listening to Dr Nader talking about physics. (soo boringg+ im not sure itha physics is a class in gust).
 
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i walked out of the classroom with farah, 
farah: cham class bagy 3endich? 
me: i have 3 more, laish?
farah: i have 2 more, gelt ne6la3 ana ma3ach ou muneera
me: um okay ma3endy mane3! 
farah: 5alas 3ayal, ashuf muneera waguloch wayn ou metta
me: ok bye, mabe a9eer late again 
farah: loool bye


after 3 depressing classes, i met muneera&farah at starbucks gust: 

me: guwa
muneera: halla, im starving wayn taboun? 
farah: meshtahya entrocontè 
me: 5alas, nru7 il hamra! 
farah: ok, yallah 5anamshy! 


we went to entercontè, and halfway through us eating lunch, two guys came and sat at the table directly infront of ours. One of them was staring at me that i got quiet uncomfortable i stopped eating. 

muneera: noor this guy is staring at you so badly
noor: adree, magdar akamel akle, im getting so uncomfortable. 
farah: shraykum ngum?
me: ehh yallah

after we left the restaurant, we shopped a liitle, the we left the mall. 

As soon as i reached home, i directly went to bed 

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more about main character; noor: 
- noor is 19 years old
- she is a freshman in gust
- social person, with two close friends: farah and muneera
- 2 siblings: one older sister, latifa, studies medicine in beirut, and one younger brother, abduallah, sophomore in high school.

Description of noor: 
perfect height for a freshman in college, almond long wavy hair that reaches her mid-back, she has kylie jenners eyes (which look really beautiful with eyeliner on) and she is skinny thin (the beautiful kind)
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hey everyone! This is my first time writing a story blog so please bare with me. I am new to the blogger world...i choose to keep myself anonymous and this story isn't entirely true but its based on true events..please help and support! That would be appreciated! Thank You!! 
PS: in the next few posts nothing particularly exciting will happen, just an introduction about noor's daily life..but later in the story more events will happen!